Thursday, January 15, 2015
If Something Isn't Working, Stop Doing It! ... by Barbara Graham
Only after an entire, complete first draft is done can the author know where the story needs to go. What characters work and who needs to leave. Admittedly, I am a “pantser” not an organized and outlined thinker. In this case, I would consider a good outline to be close to the first draft.
Once upon a time, there was a want-to-be writer in my town who asked me for advice. At the time, I had only one book in print. I was very excited about it because it was probably the ninth novel I wrote and the first that sold to a traditional publisher. When I told this person that my best advice was to write entire first draft before trying to do rewrites, he said that he wanted a perfect Chapter One before going on. My efforts to convince him that there is no perfect Chapter One fell on deaf ears. My sixth book in the series, Murder by Gravity: The Coffin Quilt, just released. In the years since I was asked for advice, his perfect Chapter One is still not written.
Writing the first draft for me is painful and messy but I slog through to the end. Secondary characters show up with their luggage and rearrange the furniture. Others pop in, raid the refrigerator and make a mess on the floor. They leave without an apology. Characters don’t get names until I’m sure they are staying and I know enough about them to be sure who they are. Not until about the third rewrite do I feel like the book is really starting to take form. What I thought should be the opening, ends up later or is discarded. Admittedly this is my approach. Whether they realize it or not, authors who write decent first drafts have probably at least worked through the first drafts mentally. I don’t have that many gray cells. The important thing is to produce full manuscripts. They can be fixed.
The fabulous thing about computers and rewrites, compared to the old quill pen and parchment approach to writing, is flexibility. Word processing has cut and paste and insert and delete which are fun, simple and fast ways to move blocks of information. You can move the beginning to the middle or even to the end and if needed, return it to its former spot.
Even dedicated outliners I know admit they will switch things about as the work progresses, following the story. Until the thing is printed, change is possible.
Murder by Gravity: The Coffin Quilt is the 6th book in the series. Number seven is under contract and I’m busy slogging through book eight.
Thanks so much for being my guest here today, Barbara. I can see why you'd choose January as your blitz writing month. Living in the far wilds of Wyoming would keep me inside at my computer as well. I love the cover art for the new book! I'm looking forward to another fine quilting mystery.
Barbara has loved mysteries "forever" and wonders what could be more fun than making up people and killing them off. Legally. A Wyoming resident, she is a long distance member of Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers and Rocky Mountain Mystery Writers of America. You can learn more about Barbara and her mysteries at her website (which is in the middle of reconstruction). She can also be found on Facebook and Goodreads.
Barbara will give away one copy of Murder by Gravity: The Coffin Quilt to a U.S. or Canada resident who leaves a comment on this post before midnight Mountain Time Friday, January 16th. The winner will be posted here on Saturday.