tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6757567191914795875.post8426178390613383434..comments2023-10-09T10:05:44.803-06:00Comments on Patricia Stoltey: Descriptive Writing Using All of the Senses ... by Holly MichaelPatricia Stolteyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17192369425956406122noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6757567191914795875.post-88634191140761660362014-10-28T09:44:53.974-06:002014-10-28T09:44:53.974-06:00I'm pretty bad about delivering sensate experi...I'm pretty bad about delivering sensate experiences in my writing. You've done a nice job here. To me good descriptive passages that allow us to experience senses should be unobtrusive and natural unless a sensate nature is the primary focus. I like to read passages that flow, involving me without distracting me.<br /><br />Good points to ponder.<br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a><br /><br />Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6757567191914795875.post-72508368999694759102014-10-27T10:22:18.065-06:002014-10-27T10:22:18.065-06:00Indeed, indeed, indeed. Thanks for the reminder. I...Indeed, indeed, indeed. Thanks for the reminder. I write more emotionally charge pieces which end up dry because the texture of the senses get left out.Dean K Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02585231102949370872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6757567191914795875.post-10663999031475306532014-10-27T10:17:49.193-06:002014-10-27T10:17:49.193-06:00Enjoy India!
As a photographer, I love taking pic...Enjoy India!<br /><br />As a photographer, I love taking pictures with texture, but I usually forget to describe it in my writing.L. Diane Wolfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06425864276166334896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6757567191914795875.post-80644110337073020032014-10-27T08:34:15.411-06:002014-10-27T08:34:15.411-06:00I usually remember to keep the senses in the scene...I usually remember to keep the senses in the scene but not always. Holly has led a very exciting life.Susan Gourley/Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02669793865290876168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6757567191914795875.post-55882719012543910402014-10-27T06:10:06.269-06:002014-10-27T06:10:06.269-06:00That's something I have to really focus on, es...That's something I have to really focus on, especially the sense of smell. Not something I think about, but we need it to add depth to our work.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com